III. 021

November 25th, 2010, 11:36 am

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blankd

November 25th, 2010, 12:01 pm

Happy Thanksgiving!

So many dialogue revisions!
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blankd

November 25th, 2010, 12:06 pm

@Kanilla Maxwell
Glad you like her! Her profile will be up in a few more pages. 8P

@Anatine and maddya333
Cheres is indeed female!

@eishiya
I'll see what I can do! The design is simple so I'm not sure of how many people would be interested 8S. Har har, its because I keep it real simple!

@appelight
Oh my you are quite small! We'll see about those theories in the future~

@themusicalmuffine
Do you think Kresin and Sidsael were related? 8O

@CottonCandyPants
She has some kind of crazily cut page hair or something! It's pretty fun to draw actually. And to be fair she is supposed to be androgynous.

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eishiya

November 25th, 2010, 12:20 pm

Simple? Is more complex than my art, hurr. You just have found a really nice, simple way of doing it, though. Still jealous!
I'd definitely buy a pin if it's reasonably priced, so there's me!

In panel 2, the top of Raz's head looks a little small D:

I feel like I should comment on the plot development here but I have nothing to say other than horrible squeals. But I figure her hair clips are related to his clip somehow?

Stephi

November 25th, 2010, 12:58 pm

He lost his memories because of Mr Magician which is why he feels obligated to look after him? Does Mr Magician know he's 'dead' ?

appelight

November 25th, 2010, 4:15 pm

oh mai plot twiiiiiissssst! this is another one of those pages where i jump up and down in anticipation! el yay! you need to print this book ill be first on your preorder list!

and yes, i am very little...but i has alots o' climbing practice XD

Anatine

November 25th, 2010, 4:23 pm

Fffffffs.
The other four?
I sense new characters
/waits eagerly

CottonCandyPants

November 26th, 2010, 3:28 am

I see, I just thought she looked girlier than any of the male characters I've seen. :) His eye doesn't work? So he just took it to fill the space 'til he got a new one? I'm guessing the whole 'dead' thing has something to do with the curse... no?? D: I have no idea, really.
WAIT A MINUTE!

otaku_lady

November 26th, 2010, 7:03 am

Cheres is a GIRL?! XD Awww.... T.T I wanted her to be a cute shota-y boy. XD Anyway, I REALLY wanna know how RAzzy died, and how it's connected to the red-woman and Texty. XD

Fang Shinobi

November 26th, 2010, 7:25 am

My first impression was that Cheres was a boy, but it's not all that surprising that she's actually a girl. Actually, it makes her cooler lol. Sorta like Toph from Avatar haha.

Kanilla Maxwell

November 26th, 2010, 9:41 am

RAZ'S CHIN. IN THE 2ND PANEL. IT'S GOING TO JUMP OUT AND KNOCK ME UNCONSCIOUS.

I guess what's I'm trying to say is that his head looks a little strange in that panel ;3

The dialogue has me up to my ears in curiosity!

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