III. 045

February 5th, 2011, 7:05 am

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blankd

February 5th, 2011, 7:11 am

The dialogue of this page went through a BILLION revisions- and by dialogue I mean Raz giving a freaking lecture. I also ended up shoving one panel from the next page into here, or at least the text ("name your offer").

I still haven't done the new incentive for this week, I am actually BEHIND one. I'm also working on how to get more updates back up to their usual pace, so thanks for bearing with it!

EDIT: Their heads are a LITTLE less flat now. 8S

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blankd

February 5th, 2011, 7:17 am

@Fang Shinobi
Guy's asshole quota hasn't been filled, it's VERY important!

@cottoncandy
Take notes 8D.

@eishiya
(But I based the hair off a lady D8)

@sychaar
Oh well, I guess this is the chapter of chicks who don't look like chicks!

@kurotsukineko
She must have gotten it from trying to do her hair!

@kitti
Raz isn't the only one with such an ability. Half-damned are half-damned 8V. She doesn't look like the pyro type does she? And Raz would never let a good rant go!

@Cala
Thank you very much! I will try to figure out a way to put the SmackJeeves description into the TWC page, but the character limit is very uh, small. The same information will be present within comic, but the more people know the better!

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eishiya

February 5th, 2011, 7:24 am

So did all the boy band people, silly xP

I'm noticing that everyone on this page (and possibly earlier pages) has very flat heads, almost nothing past the ear. Intentional or a booboo?

marimobuns

February 5th, 2011, 11:38 am

So. Is her sin that she's never made anything of her own life and only leeched off the success of others? It's a terrible waste of a life but I thought her crime would be worse. XD

Fang Shinobi

February 5th, 2011, 5:02 pm

Wow, an asshole quota. I shouldn't be so surprised lol. Maybe he'll have withdrawal syndromes if he can't fill it lol.

PS I agree with Eishiya. Your character's heads seem flat at the back. But then I thought, hey, if that's your style, so be it. I actually don't mind so much.

CottonCandyPants

February 5th, 2011, 5:08 pm

Let the comic-stalking begin! :D

appelight

February 5th, 2011, 5:52 pm

yay you updated on my birthday! its okay if you only update once a week. no one is rushing you :)

Stephi

February 5th, 2011, 6:48 pm

Ah i'm back \o/ So much to catch up on. I was initially going to review every page but lazy Stephi is lazy. Instead i'm going to ask why it looks like texty is holding an orb in the last panel...

Cala (Guest)

February 5th, 2011, 8:43 pm

I fear for the boyband golddigger.

And I definitely didn't mean sticking info in the TWC description, I like what you have there now. I just meant somewhere on this - *guestures wildly at comic site* - area. The only way to see the description now is if you access it from its page in the smackjeeves format that leads you here (Ugh hard to explain). I was thinking maybe a an 'about' tab on the sidebar or the likes?

PS I really don't mean to come in here and be all "blah blah do this blah blah", I just want to worship your comic and it slipped out. ^^;

eishiya

February 6th, 2011, 9:46 am

Cala: That page is called the comic profile :)
The description used to be on every page, which was annoying, so it was removed.
I agree about having an About page, or at least putting it on the Characters page. Maybe turn that page into a general About page?
Oooor write an entirely new description with more stuff in it, while keeping the profile description short and to the point, since that's more of an advertising thing.
Razmarus rules!

Kischii

February 6th, 2011, 10:57 am

I really like High Priest Razmarus. Somehow, he's just to awesome, when he's cruel and mean XD

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