III. 047

February 11th, 2011, 6:58 am

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blankd

February 11th, 2011, 7:07 am

This page is the BEST page to post around Valentine's Day.

Speaking of that, would you mind taking a QUICK POLL?

QEDIT: I revised Chapter II's cover because it was bugging the hell out of me.

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blankd

February 11th, 2011, 7:15 am

@Jeremy Ray (I. 008*)
But there are no rappers in this universe!

@marimobuns
I DON'T DO IT ON PURPOSE D8.

@Fang Shinobi
I wouldn't expect you to and I guess the consistency was a good thing XD.

@stephi
Who knows what goes on in his head?

@kanilla maxwell
It was outta nowhere!

@bliss41
But the real question is "at what"?

@kentameter
Really?

@sychaar
But...huh?

@cottoncandypants
Glad you find it helpful!

@shayne
Hahah, I think it's funny that some of you think the girl is going to do something to Raz, not the other way around :P. Glad you like the art!

@cala
Ohohoho. I'm glad that page helped out. 8)

@galael
Yeah none of their heads really fit in with reality but still I think the art will look better~ And to be honest Raz is supposed to not look like "taller than normal" shota bait. XD Glad you like the comic as well!

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@pple

February 11th, 2011, 7:58 am

But i thought Raz liked penis D; <3

Fang Shinobi

February 11th, 2011, 7:59 am

Oh, Raz, you. Ahaha, poor woman will just be a "distraction".

marimobuns

February 11th, 2011, 7:59 am

Lol have fun 'scratching'...that hand!mouth shadow creature sounds jealous. Not really but let's pretend he does. How come the girl looks so surprised when she's the one that offered it in the first place?! Now acting non-slutty innocent huuhhh? XD Haha I don't actually hate her as much as I make it sound. But yeah! I WANT TO SEE MAGS SOON PLOX.

appelight

February 11th, 2011, 12:54 pm

oh yesh. this IS a great page to post aroundish valentine's day. hahahaha. i love his mischievous/diabolical face in that large panel. i like how texty over there is saying "distract yes just distract" and in the second panel he is saying "i can use you" interesting.

lol have fun scratching makes it sound like she has crabs and she'll give it to him...but raz can't get those in Mionfiar. i am excited to see where this goes...and how mags will react to it if they run into each other sometime in the near future.

sit: i find it interesting on your World's page that razzy touching water=pain. that explains the sizzling.

Cala (Guest)

February 11th, 2011, 5:12 pm

Love Raz's last grin, and the text critter's teeth...

Also, I find the "I don't care anymore" amidst all the "distract"s and "use you"s quite interesting.

MetalEgo (Guest)

February 11th, 2011, 11:11 pm

Prediction: Razmarus is not who he or any of the other Chiranobles think he is. He's actually become a Bezzafrayl somehow, or he's a Razmarus imposter with false memories (or lack thereof), and the real Razmarus is D-E-D dead. Though then there's the problem of "Wall how kin he touch the bad marked???" and the answer to that is "I don't know, probably magic." But uh. Yeah I re-read the whole story, too, and I realized that, the first time through, Raz seems like an irredeemable villain, but the second time through, we realize he's an asshole that's trying to fix a broken system. Maybe I'm just crazy.

otaku_lady

February 12th, 2011, 5:12 am

@ Metalego: Actually, I kinda agree with your theory! To build upon it: The texty monster keeps calling him 'false king' usually this term is used for pretenders to the throne, but in very few cases, it's also used for LITERALLY, false kings. It's quite possible that Razzy isn't who he seems to be, or maybe WHAT he seems to be.

Also, I agree with your 'second read through' theory too. There are very good tones here of Razzy attempting to redeem people. ACTUALLY redeem them, not just use them for his own devices. I think that maybe, the person he was BEFORE whatever happened, wasn't such a good creature. HENCE, Texty the subconcious/concience.

eishiya

February 21st, 2011, 9:29 am

Jeremy Ray: CANNOT UNSEE.

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