IV. 019

July 7th, 2011, 8:05 am

Average Rating: 5.00

Rate It:

Author's Comments:



July 7th, 2011, 8:09 am

Huh, so that's who Martae is. (She was first mentioned in Ch. 2, Pg. 20 if you're curious.)

Hi Cheres, Kresin, a returning minor character (if you squint real hard, try to guess who it is!) and a new minor character 8V.

There is a NEW INCENTIVE UP, it's Proto Martae, she looked a lot different! I like her better now.

Here is the PREVIOUS incentive in case you missed it! (It's SRS BSNS Kresin and some verses from Sie'Vallse, hope you like it 8V.)


May 24th, 2019, 7:25 am



July 7th, 2011, 8:16 am

I wouldn't want anyone to feel left out! (I also put them up in the "Bonus Content" when it piles up a little XD)

And yes, Sid's gotta SAVE PEOPLE ;_;

I'm on break so I'm trying to get as many pages done as possible before school gets back to kicking my ass! And I'm glad you think so 8D, it's up there thanks to each of you!

And that little slinker is just skinny, he's a NOODLE. And shucks, I'm so flattered you're doing that XP.

Well it's a question if that's a hint 8U.

@Daughter of Leo
Sid's got mutes to ~save~ and he's speaking in Astervotum 8D

Anyway glad you enjoy reading and rereading it XD Having fun picking up on those new things?

I never really thought of it that way haha...

Heh, that's a nice nickname. SlyGuy's got a deathwish if he's aiming to take Raz's church.

(Oh there will be WORDS on those gods haha...)

Post A Comment On SJ
Jump to SJ Comments

comments powered by Disqus

SJ Users' Comments:


July 7th, 2011, 8:32 am

It's Ilium <3 And it's DeSTRESS Ladies' Night!

Edit: Cheres is making the Y U NO HEAL ALAU face.


July 7th, 2011, 8:37 am

Tits everywhere. I'm so happy =D.
Jeez, your on a role with these pages. *w*

Cala (Guest)

July 7th, 2011, 2:00 pm

WORDS sound excellent.

And maybe SlyGuy doesn't want to 'take' the church... just redecorate. Stealing Raz's shit would be epic.

Yay for new characters! That other one is the kind girl Raz gave the Bezzas, isn't she? Illium or something?

I find Martae's name interesting... not near as sinister as the other Chira's chosen titles. The reference you linked to even seems to show her in a bit of a healer capacity... Though 'Life Keeper' seems contratictory if she's beating the poop out of Cheres here. Haha

Edit: *Belated realization of stupidity* Martae's a Bezza... Heh heh... Oops.

In that case, does she subscribe to the same 'lawyer'ish idea as Sid?

kitti (Guest)

July 7th, 2011, 3:53 pm

Ooh, who's the cutey with the hedgeclippers? yet another unmarked? also this page just makes kresin look even more like the mom.

also, cheres is saying "i just need you to heal alau" i bet


July 7th, 2011, 4:16 pm

:< Can't if guy or girl.... But the bandage placement and eye lashes indicated otherwise... >o>
Proto Martae is cute :D
Suriuz Martae is good too tho :D

Daughter of Leo

July 7th, 2011, 8:47 pm

Haha I really am, I actually just finished the part with Ilium so it was really cool to click on the new page and see her. And I like Martae already, though Kresin made me laugh.

I have two questions for you:

First, did you make Astervotum up yourself? I've been trying to create a language for a story I've been writing but can't seem to get it to work. :/

Second, are you going to post an updated version of the Bezzafrayl and Chiranoble Canon designs when we learn more of the characters? Just curious..


July 9th, 2011, 7:44 am

illium! yay! martae loves the sparting. she is so muscular...unless she is a feminine he...HEAL ALAU first! :D it is indeed an estrogen ocean up in this page although i cant tell if the cute hedge clipper is a he or a she either. but thats what i absolutely love about your characters is that most the women look androgynous which is part of the mystery!

Post A Comment On SJ
Jump to FreeTalk