IV. 028

August 14th, 2011, 8:30 am

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August 14th, 2011, 8:34 am

Deceptively, there's a lot of little bits of info in this. Have fun looking 8O. There was an update less than 24 hours ago!

In case you missed it, here is the PREVIOUS INCENTIVE, it's Cheres and Martae swapping their Chira/Bezza-ness respectively.

And of course a NEW INCENTIVE, it's MiniMartae vs ???.

Also this is pretty much one of the last days to vote. Vote for what you think is best in the Smackies! 8)

EDIT: Oh my, the incentive tags were broken! (They're fixed now!)

EDIT2: Made another updated to the Astervotum section, there was an inconsistency (it has not appeared in any dialogue though), that had to be fixed.


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August 14th, 2011, 8:38 am

Yeah they are hypnotic! And that is an interesting theory, glad you like her design too!

Shh don't let her hear you 8O.

I find that endearment so odd XD. And you think so? That's very interesting to hear! (And I dub this part of the chapter "ladies night" lol.)

They're awfully similar aren't they?

I am curious what inspired the comparison if you don't mind of course. XD. And hahah, oh you.

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YAY 4 quick updates!!


August 14th, 2011, 9:40 am

I'm trying i'm trying...grrrr i'm really slow on these kinds of things...i have to keep rereading but that's fine because I enjoy this comic!!

fefefeee (Guest)

August 14th, 2011, 9:54 am

Thanks for updating!! Weee new characters debut :D lemme guess

Amvisile : scribe? librarian?
Lisair : cook? tavern owner?
Esvron: nurse?


August 14th, 2011, 10:15 am

The fact that Kresin can just stand there with a perfectly calm expression in the face of the semi-skeletal Juvciel proves that she is in fact awesome.


August 14th, 2011, 10:33 am

God dammit, i barely have a hold on english and now i'm about to try and learn De-stress language. Why does your awesomness mean i have to work >.<
...ooo blue information orbs. Much better than a mobile, can i get the internet on it as well?
Thanks for the quick update! 8D


August 14th, 2011, 11:07 am

Yea well. Your comic is odd. Ohhhh snap. xD *shot*

And I think it might be because elements of the male characters can easily be found in normal guys IRL, while many of the female characters don't really have any behavior that I can relate to people I know IRL. o-o Idk though. Maybe, maybe not. xD I haven't examined the exact way in which you introduce characters too closely. Or at all. Derp. *SHOULD TAKE NOTES THIS IS A LEARNING EXPERIENCE?! 8D*

Another update so soon! Ugggh one of these days I will figure out your mystikul magic language. (It's mainly "Replienvi cwictsaa phe" that makes me go wth is she saying D8 ) But I gotsa final exam tomorrow.

And wow, all them busy Bezza.

Edit: @ Canne: Yeah, I don't think I'd be able to stop myself from beaming back at that smile. 8D

OK obnoxious comment fourth edition done.

Cala (Guest)

August 14th, 2011, 1:04 pm

Gahhhh I was not disappointed at all!! Juvciel is the coolest! Now does she moonlight as Red Figure, or are they mysterious twins? Hahah.

Master of Justice, Master of Protection... sounds like some secret club they've got going on. Is it just me, or are the Bezzafrayl much more organized than the Chiranobles? I got the idea from Raz's dialogue that Cheres decided to treat her little flock of dead people like workers, hence the title of overseer. Raz is a egotistical nutball who likes being in the center of his own weird religion. So it seems like they picked their jobs and did whatever they wanted. Contrarily, titles about Protection and Justice seem all serious and assigned and stuff. I dunno, just saying, I hope my rambling isn't completely wrong!

Also this monitoring stuff.. unanimous AS USUAL... sounds a little bit like Big Brother's watching to me, hahahaah.

On a less serious note, I'm convinced that Amvisile is going to be a sexy one!


August 14th, 2011, 4:11 pm

Hnnn I like the guy with the onion. Also as much as I miss Mags and Raz, this chapter is fun~

kitti (Guest)

August 14th, 2011, 8:22 pm

lookit the Bezzas. Onion man (Lisair?) is my fav, like his expression. chick looks like the therapist you mentioned earlier?

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