IV. 042

October 9th, 2011, 5:24 am

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blankd

October 9th, 2011, 5:29 am

I hope no one feels sorry for that twerp.

Anyway the cracks at the bottom were something that sprouted up while I was working on it, I liked the effect so I kept and refined it, you'll find out what it means next page! (Also sorry for the lack of updates, starting up this quarter for school was rough!)

And because I want to see how fast I can run this into the ground, the NEW INCENTIVE is Kavir's ~emotions~ in lazy webcomic style.

EDIT: The Bonus Content section has been updated up to the most recent (last) incentive!
EDIT2: The Character *TEXT* has been updated and there have been some minor updates to the World page.

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blankd

October 9th, 2011, 5:32 am

@momothegreat
Now he gets it in-comic too!

@jadeann
As big sisters should!

@dizzysosilly
It's fine, he's hoping no one remembers it anyway!

@mythee
Pretty much.

@cannetella
She's a master of the physical one too. XD

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KenTexan

October 9th, 2011, 8:34 am

I feel so bad for-- mmkay I can't start lying here. Might get sister-slapped.

I don't pity him one bit. He's not exactly a POLITE boy 24/7, and he did just suddenly leave without telling anyone where he was going.

If anyone teardrop-cries or goes NOOOOOOO THE BIG SISTER IS EVIIIIIL-- I will laugh. HARD.

janylin

October 9th, 2011, 9:13 am

*warning: bad words!* dude, if a bitch gets bitch-slapped by a bitch who was angry at that bitch in a moment where the bitch was being apologetic for some bitch thing he had done of course i'm gonna feel a little sorry for that bitch :(

kitti (Guest)

October 9th, 2011, 9:30 am

and that was what started young kavir on the road to villainy. or is this the part where his sister gets possessed by a demon? what series am i talking about again?

i do feel a little sorry for him! yes he's a bit of a brat, but he seems to have behaved so stupidly because he felt trapped and scared. kids do that sometimes.

eishiya

October 9th, 2011, 10:40 am

Normally I'd feel sorry for anybody that gets slapped, but his face in the last panel is so well-done that it's worth it. Kavir, this is why you must endure pain.

In the incentive, the emote didn't read at first so I thought he turned into ~*monster form*~.

Stephi

October 9th, 2011, 11:09 am

Aww, emotion portrayed so very well in the last panel. Bless him, you don't go blaming other people for your mistakes. Now go and think about what you've done.

shi

October 9th, 2011, 12:56 pm

I was waiting for someone to slap him. Goddamn Kavir, trying to blame it on Gerif? I almost feel bad for him... but the key word is almost.

And that face in the last panel really is great! His nervous feet in the middle panel are nice too.

Tanith Mot

October 9th, 2011, 2:10 pm

* thinking poses *

I'm thinking..

MomotheGreat

October 9th, 2011, 3:23 pm

Hum.
Well.
He didn't deserve THAT much; I thought the "No-Punishment" + a little cold shoulder method would've made him brood a little moar, BUT, however yu wanna do things, scary older sister e_e

marimobuns

October 9th, 2011, 6:37 pm

I would slap him however many times if he looked like that afterwards each time. Because...DAWWWW.

That was potentially disturbing...

And well, I DO feel bad for him...getting slapped in the face is a terrible feeling. I'm sure Kavir already knew he did something wrong, hence the defensive need to put some of the blame toward Gerif and he DID ask to go home earlier earlier so he was probably justifying himself...and he IS pretty young. So yeah, good lesson Big Sis, well earned...but you should slap him some more just because of that face in the last panel--*is shot*

Honestly, I don't see how else she could have drilled that lesson home besides through his cheek, but it's still kinda sad to see a child getting slapped in the face.
...O_o?

Faery Goddyss

October 10th, 2011, 1:39 am

I feel sorry for him because I dont know what the fudge muffin is going on. I think I need to go re-read this entire story again, several times...and very slowly.

And, sorry if this was already addressed, but why are these pages in a blueish tint while the others are in gray scale/red? Are these flash back pages? Is the kid the same guy in the gray scale pages that covers his one eye with a patch?

Cannetella

October 10th, 2011, 10:04 am

He really did have it coming.
Little bastard tried to blame it on Gerif. <.<

Mythee

October 10th, 2011, 10:57 pm

Hitting is off-limits! That's abuse! DDDD8 *derp*

Also, I just realized they are all barefooted. WEIRDSAUCE

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