IV. 062

December 27th, 2011, 8:42 am

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December 27th, 2011, 8:59 am

Busting chops~ Anyway, try to read it carefully, there's a lot of info in that and you might want to check the previous page to get the flow of the conversation better. 8U

Once again, Esvron is the other female, Lisair is the one with curly hair and beard-stubble is Amvisile.

Also this time's INCENTIVE is some uh, more slash-y questions? It's worksafe. Vote to see the answers!

Remember that you can submit them to here!

The secret is currently at 4.5%!


May 24th, 2019, 7:17 am



December 27th, 2011, 9:02 am

*spoilers* It's this page!?

Thanks and glad that you enjoyed them, I'm actually going to be spacing out your answers, so do be patient!

Beard-stubly = Amvisile
Guy at the very edge = Lisair

IDK, he's pretty boring in terms of personality!

I'd say she knows how to burrrrn people pretty good too. Also she'd have a snake-y body pillow or something. 83

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December 27th, 2011, 9:02 am

Oooh Kresin +W+ <3. Such a strong serious lady. I like....


December 27th, 2011, 9:27 am

Kresin you are a hero. ;v; But yeah I understand all too well how irritating it must be for her to be the only one proactive about this. X-X

About spacing the questions, I don't mind at all! It's wondrous that you're answering all of them, thank you. <3 YOU ARE ALSO A HEROoooo~!


December 27th, 2011, 4:31 pm

Wow, you updated so damn fast I didn't get to comment on the previous page. o_o

First off - that incentive is wonderful :D I didn't realize page one was the first time they'd ever met! That's crazy! Good thing Raz isn't normal, because if the first thing someone tried to do to a normal person was seduce them, I think said normal person would feel very, very awkward.

I'm glad someone asked (directly or otherwise) if there had even been any actual sex between the two. Like I said, I didn't realize that that was their first meeting. I think I assumed that Magician had at least attempted it before, but had been just as successful as he was in the first few pages. I.e., not a damn bit.

Oh, you didn't mean for him to be shota looking? I thought I read that you said that somewhere. Sorry to put words in your mouth, then C: Although, I did really love how he was drawn in the beginning. But, masculine isn't bad either. It's just weird that he seems to be in a slow competition with the magician for the most MAHNLEH FAY-SUH. *sparkle sparkle*

What sort of effect? Don't get my hopes up, now :< I'll come right out and admit that I hope it's sexual in some way.

Although, I do admire you shushing your readers and telling them PLOT FIRST. But I think we are all secretly, or not so secretly, wish for a couple. Ah. But in my head, I can't work it out plot-wise that they'd be happy together or whatnot.

Also, random thought. I really like the scar woman. I don't know if anyone brought her up yet, but I am really interested in her as a character. She's able to stand up to Raz, for crying out loud. She put up with his taunts/threats/jeers, and didn't back out of following through with letting him ~have his way with her~. I so far think she's a strong character with the potential for so much.

(Which means I'll cry if you kill her off really quickly D:)

I dunno, I look forward to seeing where that goes, with her around. I like her a lot. X) And want to know her name.

Okay, I'm done. C:
Why do my comments always end up so long. Goddamit.
Marry (belated) Christmas!

leusekuchen (Guest)

December 27th, 2011, 4:39 pm

Hi blankd!

I missed the Christmas goody ;_; Oh, well. More pages instead!

Sorry for just disappearing like that - I am a failure at keeping up contacts. Also, why half my family has decided it would be a good idea to be born in December is beyond me...

About the printing; I like being optimistic. I have no clue about anything to do with computer graphics, but the 'content' reason I understand. I did swallow a bit when I first started reading this comic ;) But even at the beginning your style was different from others and I liked it for its clear lines and pronounced contrasts. I still like these. I especially like that you have real backgrounds but you are not overdoing them. They, as the characters convey atmosphere wonderfully...
See; there are people who work with colour or with lots of details, both of which is nice, but so often I feel that they are unable to bring out a situation's atmosphere. The interior of a chapel could just as well be a cosy living room if it wasn't for the fact that you can clearly see it is not… Does that make any sense at all?
And at the same time I like how you use shades of grey for things that are slightly farther away and hatchings for some shadows and cracks or to fill part of the furnishings. It makes everything more alive, because your brain still has something to do.
And your characters all have different features and physiques. I mean REALLY different ones! It’s marvellous! :DD
The other thing I find great about this comic is that I can relate to all the characters’ feelings, I actually find even Mags really easy to understand, contrary to VIOLENTLY’S opinion, but I guess that is what is called ‘subjective perception’. Even the ‘knife scene’ was fine for me before you changed it. I mean, you could see that Mags grip was pretty lax and therefore unsuitable to stab anything.
Sooo, just wanted to let you know that I think you draw muscle tension, facial expressions and gestures really well.

Oh! And since I don’t know when I will comment next I might just as well add that I think it is great that you put so much thought (a world! and – OMG – a whole language!) into the story… such a pity something that has had so much effort put into it will not be printed…



December 27th, 2011, 6:50 pm

Man Kresin sure likes putting things back into their boxes. Do they have chocolate in Mionfaer? Somebody should probably get her some chocolate.


December 27th, 2011, 7:06 pm

I really like Kresin <3
I can sort of "hear" her sarcasm


December 29th, 2011, 8:26 am

Someone should've put her in charge. I like Kresin!

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