II. 055

September 23rd, 2010, 7:38 pm

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September 23rd, 2010, 7:42 pm

Such good, blind faith. 8>

*Now to kill the page, that last panel I couldn't help but think back to that one scene in Disney's Aladdin... you know the one.


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September 23rd, 2010, 7:51 pm

Well they are quite generous...

More like he's somewhat in a disguise if you think about it. The only thing that could "give him away" are really his eyes and she has the wrong idea about them. And I'm flattered! If you do decide on one please send me a picture! As for the song, well it could be the next verse(s) couldn't it? And yes he is being relatively nice ain't he?

Glad it helped. And teehee, clevage. And uh... you decide.

@fang shinobi
To be fair Kresin was the first female to appear...admittedly she does have smaller breasts, but still-! (I wonder why no one else noticed Ilium's boobs in the previous pages? o_O) And heh, she won't be the last female in this!

lol. Haha but the plot still hasn't appeared yet! XD I thought BL was just PG13 stuff in all honesty (and there's been uncensored penis D8). And you know me about updates, I'm trying to crank out stuff to make up for my downtime! And psh he's just mean to certain people, it's (weirdly enough) not a sex thing.

But he's dead D8. Dead men eat no caaake!

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September 23rd, 2010, 7:49 pm

That last panel...you're right.. I see it now. XD But I can only imagine what will happen won't be good on her part.


September 23rd, 2010, 7:53 pm

i don't D8

anyway, fangirling over raz...

... still fangirling...

... still fangirling...

... still fangirling...

... kay! now for the rest of the page! illium looks so sweet in the first panel! seriously, how do you do it? why can't i draw like you? (life is the best experience, i know, i know... lol XD)

and raz's eye! and expression! know i said i was done fangirling, but DANG... i have no words for just how awesome razmarus is. and i knew there would be a catch to raz's "niceness"...

looking forward to more of illium, if she is sticking around, she's interesting! how did she end up here?

oh, and i love the big red "Heh". it adds a razzy touch.

oh, and there you have how tela fooled her. though, she doesn't seem all that hard to fool... ^.^'

and raz's hand! XD amazing!

... ya know, i lied. i will never stop fangirling over razzy. NEVER!!!! XD

...thinking about what an awesome disney villian raz would be... cept they wouldn't let him swear... or raep people... they would be like 4kids! D8 only with disneyness!

... lol, now i'm wondering what raz's big villian song would be...

... and i'm rambling... oh, well, thius comic deserves it... (cause it's so awesome! XD besides, you got me off on disney while listening to a disney song, so i'll ramble on that...)

anyway, awesomeness increasing tenfold with each page, and more fangirliness to ensue! XP


in fact, i was so enthused by the idea of raz having a villian song that i wrote one to the beat of Smells Like Teen Spirit. it is here:


i hope you like it! ^.^


September 23rd, 2010, 8:23 pm

I really like the way you drew Raz on this page. Faces, that hand, everything. Really stands out from before, but I figure that's your improvement ;D


September 23rd, 2010, 8:31 pm

Awe sad face, I wanted to feed him cake. Love the page btw
sexy + raz = rexy?


September 23rd, 2010, 8:52 pm

to comment on your response: whaddya mean pg 13? ohboyohboyohboy i can't wait to see what is r18 in blankdictionary if THAT in ch1 was pg13...

d'awwww he called her type a rarity. i don't know if that is a bad or good thing... but i like Ilium alot....

btw happy pre-500 fans. you should should draw something delicious (everything you draw is delicious)...or...or...or...a sexy cover page...or something...

and i was just rereading this whole comic and realized how much razzy's appearance has been defined. he looks more manly and his features are more prominent. i swear he gets sexier and sexier as the pages come along. especially his mouth area...

that poor poor other person...he looks so scared...

edit: dude i commented like at 7ish but i forgot to hit submit and i left and now that i came back there are 3 more comments...lol


September 23rd, 2010, 10:58 pm



September 24th, 2010, 7:41 am

BL, at least in Japan, can refer to both PG-13 stuff and R-18 (Togainu no Chi is BL, and that's an adult game, for example). It's a catch-all term for mxm meant for a female audience.
In the west, there's some split, some people use BL and yaoi to refer to PG-13 and R-18 stuff respectively, some (myself included) use BL for everything.
"Yaoi" is an outdated term, shouldn't really be used anymore :/

Congrats on 500!


September 24th, 2010, 4:24 pm

Hmm, until this page i never really liked Raz with black hair but ah...i'm a convert. The one eye thing is also growing on me.


September 24th, 2010, 6:51 pm

Hahaha, the flesh-eaten arm guy's like falling over. Needs moar Arkiel. :D

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