II. 056

September 24th, 2010, 6:49 pm

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blankd

September 24th, 2010, 6:54 pm

Yes to fix burning you must add MORE BURNING... or cut it off.

Also IDEAS for what you want to see for 500 fans appreciation?

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blankd

September 24th, 2010, 7:00 pm

@luckytrinity
Raz: And this is where I push you off Carpet.
Ilium: ),8

@sbdrag
So far I only see McFreakyArm really suffering from this. Raz as a Disney villain... but would he be the villain of? Also lol at the song.

@eishiya
Thanks! I hope I continue to improve XD

@Awkward_Rainbow
I'm sure he'd like the cake anyway and thanks.

@appelight
Ohnoes, that's not what I meant! I meant since Yaoi = no plot but just penis and BL = plot (usually) and keeping it PG13, I don't know what dS would be. (Plot still hasn't been shown you know @_@) Yeah Raz looks closer to what his age is supposed to be lol.

@eishiya2
(XD) I give up on the labels at this point and just say "it's gay" if anyone asks )8 And again thanks!

@Stephi
Irony is that those are temporary...OR ARE THEY?! (dundunDUUUUN!)

@MetalEgo
Gravity is just too much- those breasts are enormous! (But Arkiel isn't dead and...well do you really want him to be in this comic? He'd be all D: every page)

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eishiya

September 24th, 2010, 7:49 pm

The panel flow on this page threw me off because the second panel ended lower than the third and fourth ):

Edit: Mmmboobies.
Dat hand. I loves it.

Morichi

September 24th, 2010, 8:18 pm

I feel obligated to know her name. I like her...will she be a major character or is she just here temporarily?

So the wounded guy is singing right? Whats the song about?

Awkward_Rainbow

September 24th, 2010, 10:06 pm

D: Oh noes singing guy is gonna get hurt. Sad face!

MetalEgo

September 24th, 2010, 11:55 pm

TOO MUCH GRAVITY. Nah, Arkiel doesn't have to be in here. He would, indeed, be making sad faces, and that would be sad. However, the 500 fan mark CAN consist of Arkiel, though it wouldn't reely make sense. I'll just settle for LiveStream requests. OH HAY, you could do like, a spiderman Sid and a Dr. Octopus Razz FIGHTING. Or some equivalent of that. Like Batman. Or uh. Dinosaurs fighting. People always like dinosaurs!

appelight

September 25th, 2010, 12:13 am

oh mai! el raz has brought out the HAND! I love ilium more and more...she kind of reminds me of me in that im all like "oh noes save everything!" <-- but i would die for some boobies like those....

to recomment on your comment: well if this is not the plot yet then your un-plot is amazing... and now im wondering just how old razzy is supposed to be... but that's okay cause i likey older men... and that last panel that raz's hand is transforming...yes razzy's face is gorgeous.. i can't get enough of it... but i've said this on almost every page already...

Fang Shinobi

September 25th, 2010, 1:23 am

Yup, I guess there were girls before, but they didn't have her boobage. Ohmaygad why do I keep talking about boobies?! *bangs head* Gotta get my head out of the gutter -_-*

sbdrag

September 25th, 2010, 10:43 am

i love raz!!! XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD

... yeah. and ilium. she's sweet. making the hard decisions....

and he would be the villain of morals and abstinence!!!

... lol. google chrome spellchecks whatever i write now, or this would have poor spelling indeed. anyway, excited for the next page, as always!!! XP

Stephi

September 25th, 2010, 6:17 pm

Half transformation hand \o/ * stares * Raz is so cool and evil and arrogant and gah...just so awesome. Though it has to be said, i'm kind of missing Magician. Iliums boobs distracted me for a while though >.> bravo.

Stephi

September 25th, 2010, 8:48 pm

Ah, ah! I just had a thought! Little red man following Raz is a corrupted nihalifer(sp?) soul? Out to seek revenge?

Hisui-Hyena

September 25th, 2010, 9:00 pm

man, i duno weather i hate him or love him XD

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