II. 061

October 1st, 2010, 5:57 pm

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October 1st, 2010, 5:57 pm

He probably didn't...see that one coming.

*I edited one of the lines in the previous page, it conveys the same thing but less cryptically... hopefully.


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October 1st, 2010, 6:10 pm

Har, no. lol

Sorry, half-damned can only expect pain and suffering 8>

Yep, which is why I'm not going to do it anymore. And haha, sorry I'm not the best at conveying ideas. I just use page-continuity from previous pages. Sometimes I miss things but fix them as soon as possible. The smoke is easy to remember because he's missing his eye 8>.

What do yooou think it meaans? Sid is the Advocate of the Bezzafrayl, but it was mentioned several pages ago (at least 30+)

Ahaha (spoilers?) that won't happen. Texty is harder to read this time just because of how "small" its body is this time (in relation to the panels and shots). Raz doesn't know what the hell it is and doesn't like it.

Haha, sorry about that.

Well I'm not going to lie, some things will be spelled out but other stuff will require some thinking. I actually recommend re-reading things, not for ego stroking but because maybe you'll find or realize things you didn't notice.

Haha (not really, you just don't know what to context to look for). Assuming it'll have any real effect lol. IDK, Raz is guyish but not manly, and he has ~*nice hair*~

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October 1st, 2010, 6:11 pm

You fell into that one kiddo. That was clever, though.

But really, if you saved a person's life without their consent, without their asking, they owe you nothing. You acted on your own means. So dumb answer.


October 1st, 2010, 6:13 pm

No Razzy, bad Razzy, baaaaad. That's not 'asking'. :I


October 1st, 2010, 6:52 pm

Razzzy! Bad! ^.^ No stealing poor people's eyes!


October 2nd, 2010, 12:03 am

ooooo! does this mean he will have one human eye and one chiranoble eye? cause that would be interesting to see.

it seems like this arc is coming to an end soon. i find it funny how you said about 30 pages ago that chapter 2 was coming to an end. lol not that i mind cause i NEVER want this story to end cause i love it so much.

i can't wait to see razzy with his new eye. if his body accepts the eye that is...considering it has to be from a "mortal article" and not a soul's eye. if his body does accept it for a while it will be interesting to see what sid's reaction would be (if he is smart enough to realize where the eye came from and how he is kind of the initial cause of the eye-stealage.)

I was wondering if Maggie by this time has had enough rest but then i realized that these past 20 pages all span about a couple of hours in destress-time, so technically even though maggie has been resting off-set for a month now...he has technically just been dozing off for an hour or two if that...


October 2nd, 2010, 2:10 am

ouch that has to be painful, yet I can't stop laughing at it.


October 2nd, 2010, 6:16 am

Heh, makes sense. So Sid is now first in mind for 'scratching that itch' Mr Magician is replaced so easily?! "Is that how you really feel" indeed! I suppose he did express an interest in Sid when they first met. *sigh * Poor guy, just wants to be loved/raped. Is that really so much to ask in a place like Mionfaer? * dramatic hand gestures *

Ah i love the second panel, that eye and the way it seems to turn in such a pissed off way. I haven't sat down and appreciated your toning (too wrapped up in the story) , but now i think about you use so many techiques and they all work so wonderfully. That and your text. I've never experienced text like it, but it is love.


October 2nd, 2010, 10:25 am

D: Oh noes, his eye! But still your comment made me laugh. Stupid bad eye puns.


October 2nd, 2010, 11:09 am

i just realized something...

although he's not the archetype precisely, raz could loosely be defined as an anti-hero, couldn't he? idk, just a thought.

anyway, yes razzy, yes. just awesomeness.

... then he returns to mags and sid with two eyes... wonder how that goes...

and anyway, i loves it all!! ^^

and so excited for the next page, even if my "situation" is a definate no.... gosh, now it's playing like a soap opera in my mind with all the over dramatic acting and strange lighting... cue "days of our lives" theme....

lol XP


October 3rd, 2010, 9:45 am

lmao guess he won't 'see' much else coming now will he.
man that line cracked me up

awww, ur building up his character really well.


April 22nd, 2011, 1:41 pm

Okay. I'm in Wetern Civ right now. I just LAUGHED OUT LOUD at your free talk. xD


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August 1st, 2011, 5:42 am

Can't say he didn't had it coming. An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind.


January 3rd, 2012, 2:44 am

=l damn haha

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